Thread:Sine dei gloriem/@comment-5789047-20130715003322/@comment-5789047-20130715185254


 * Fine, can you teach me, please?

Never start a sentance with a conjunction

Capital letters go on proper nouns and at the beginning of sentences so " '''The Scithian sided with the huns are defeated by the slavs, who secure west and northern scithia, while the huns and scithian keep eastern and southern scithia." ''' should be "The Scythians that sided with the Huns are defeated by the Slavs, whome secure Western and Northern Scythia, while the Huns and Scythians keep Eastern and Southern Scythia."

Also, that was a run-on-sentance. Try to break it into more sentences, so: "The Scythians that sided witht the Huns are defeated by the Slavs, whome secure Western and Northern Scythia. Meanwhile, the Huns and Scythians keep Eastern and Souther Scythia"

BTW it's SYTHIA not SITHIA. Remember Scythians invented Scythes.

That should be good for now.